This is impressive art! You really created a lot of details, you also took care about the shadings and lightings. I can see and feel a whole story in it! The colours are great, it looks like you drew this on paper and coloured it with pencils, but yet in an amazing way! This was not meant negative. I personally like the feathers, which fall slowly on the ground the most. I also like Clary's hair, it has the some colour as the blood which is on the feathers. All in one, you made an amazing szenario in your art!