The Dark Artifact Chapter 1 - Page 16

It's really been a long time since I did a critic.
Anyway, I really like your sketchy art-style. It needs some refining (while still maintaining it's sketchiness) but so far you're improving. I believe you should stick with it. I'm glad you took my suggestion about using hatch lines. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

I hadn't notice it till now but your character designs are also interesting. The dialect between them also flows naturally and doesn't feel scripted. Of course, I had to judge this based on your prior pages.

There's just one problem you should be wary of. Be careful about not assigning word bubbles or the reader will assume the previous person is speaking.